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a little poetry anyone?
Mar 13th, 2006 at 11:04pm
 
I have been practicing some 31-syllable poetry called Waka.  It is really neat form of Japanese poetry. I just wanted to share some with you all. Smiley  This was todays verses on the weather:

Cold rains mare the day
The sun hides her face behind
a gray fan of clouds
Dreary skies weep icy tears
that wash away winters snow
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Reply #1 - Mar 13th, 2006 at 11:36pm
 
I like it.  Thanks Lisabelle
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Reply #2 - Mar 14th, 2006 at 12:25am
 
PreciousLocks Thanks!...
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Reply #3 - Mar 14th, 2006 at 11:28am
 
Very nice!
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Reply #4 - Mar 14th, 2006 at 11:49am
 
Pretty!  I can see it in my mind as I read it.  Burrrr!
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Reply #5 - Mar 14th, 2006 at 3:24pm
 
I like it too! Smiley
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Reply #6 - Mar 14th, 2006 at 3:27pm
 
Oh, that's really nice Cheesy Great job Lisabelle Smiley
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Reply #7 - Mar 14th, 2006 at 7:41pm
 
I agree with Sakina, you're making me cold! Smiley
I like it. It's a nice rhythm
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Reply #8 - Mar 16th, 2006 at 5:16pm
 
Oh my!  Thanks everyone!!  here is another I did one the really windy night we had. Picture a girl in long flowing kosode,sitting on the tatmai floor of her room alone in the dark...

A cold windy night.
Crowded beside my brazier,
embracing it’s warmth.
Dark clouds race across the moon
Trees thrash the air like demon wings

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Reply #9 - Mar 16th, 2006 at 6:31pm
 
I think I see you running out of the gate with this!!  Great job!  I really like it Smiley Grin
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Reply #10 - Mar 17th, 2006 at 8:10am
 
Thanks Curlygirl64  Grin  I have been writing poetry on and off for years.  Waka is new to me though and I find it very addictive. Roll Eyes
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Reply #11 - Mar 17th, 2006 at 3:10pm
 
You're good at it Grin I can see why it's addictive!
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Reply #12 - Mar 17th, 2006 at 11:59pm
 
Your poems really paint a picture in my mind.  Wonderful!
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Reply #13 - Mar 18th, 2006 at 7:11am
 
Curlygirl64, Silvermaine Thanks so much!...
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Reply #14 - Mar 18th, 2006 at 1:02pm
 
Keep'em coming Smiley  Not to rush you or anything.....when the "creative juices" start flowing,we're listening..... Grin
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